Show, not tell
You can tell a story fine without a narrator telling us everything straight out. Most of the narration in this thing is telling us stuff we can already see. "What does the future hold?" - just show us time pass. "Bitey is lonely and stuff" - we can see that by him being alone and all the other creatures having companionship. "We are about to find out." - really? Just show us. I'm sure we'll realize we're about to find out something when we find it out.