Show, not tell
You can tell a story fine without a narrator telling us everything straight out. Most of the narration in this thing is telling us stuff we can already see. "What does the future hold?" - just show us time pass. "Bitey is lonely and stuff" - we can see that by him being alone and all the other creatures having companionship. "We are about to find out." - really? Just show us. I'm sure we'll realize we're about to find out something when we find it out.
That woman was chewing soup.
Chewing it with her teeth.
yes, yes she was. It could have been chicken soup?
It's really great.
This movie makes me so nerd-happy. :D
I love music videos like this! So sleek and simple, yet it keeps with the music so well.
I thought it was great. The animation was simple but worked, even though it got sorta out of sync towards the end.
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